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Why the river flows
By rainbowgoth
She hugs him
She cries
He kisses her
She dries her eyes
He walks away
She tries to smile
As he turns around
But she can't
It hurts too much
The hapiness is gone
Only pain remains
She hides in a corner
She lets the dam break
The rivers flow from her eyes
Smearing her mascara
She dries her eyes
Washes her face
Takes a shower
Washing him away
Changes her clothes
And thus begins a new day
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Copyright 2005 rainbowgoth
Published on Saturday, May 14, 2005.
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On Friday, April 20, 2007, Enigma
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wrote:
I like. Nice write :)
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A former member wrote:
simple and good!
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On Tuesday, August 22, 2006, the dried flower
(67) wrote:
i really like this poem, it makes me think of a simular situation i am in. i can never wash my love away, but in good time the pain can wash away. good write.
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A former member wrote:
you're outstanding, you portray so many feelings all at once
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
I'm really liking the way you write. Awesome. ~*~Tart~*~
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Wow. Somehow this is a lot of emotion. Beautifully written and welcome to DP :)
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