directionless thoughts in misery's wake
By wandering druid
In a cacophony i exist
Might as well be silence
There's nothing said
In sunlight i walk
But i enjoy the rain more
i live
but i'm not
alive...
my life lies empty
forlorn
Lonely like distant thunder
my heart
torn
asunder...
Within the sweet night
as winds whisper
through trees
Nature seems as lonely
as i
Seeking to speak
with her children
who see her as just
another resource to exploit
So alike
she and i
and thousands upon thousands others
giving until we've nothing left
and left to despair
midst the sea of voices
'til we cut a sanguine swathe
to create a path
for release...
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Copyright 2005 onelastbreath
Published on Saturday, April 30, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
Elegant without pretentiousness. Cool and pure and ...well done!
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On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, Thorn
(282) wrote:
Wow. This is very good. I love the wording and the flow.
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A former member wrote:
"i live but i am not alive" i liked that line. you portrayed your tone nicely
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On Saturday, April 30, 2005, Grey Lies
(185) wrote:
yes...lovely flow...midst the sea of voices 'til we cut a sanguine swathe to create a path for release... untouchable
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On Saturday, April 30, 2005, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
intriguing, complex maze you lead my mind on...touching my faith with a brilliant sparkle.
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On Saturday, April 30, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Wow. This is marvalous (sp?). I love how it flows