Incognito
By Spiritus_Frumenti
Motherless silences,
Foraging virtues in mountains too high for heaven’s reach
In places too fond of the way time despairingly speaks
Forsaken plentitude,
In search of rain the truth befalls
On hearts no longer able to be still,
In the ways of passions,
Of unbelievable rage, love and determination
Corroding to nothing as the clouds collapse
Seeing birds fly away without a purpose
With a wind no longer freeing
And an air no longer worth breathing
Petulant disenchantment,
Bellowing fanciful echoes in the eternity of hours
Forgetting entirely of the will to live
Responding quietly to the motions attributed
In every aspect of what’s mean to be
Knowing nothing,
Of what all the void has created
More mysterious than a view of the sky
Right before night closes in,
More concealing than the calm waves of the deepest ocean,
Stretching out into a never-ending transition of space
A weaving of life,
Particulars of undesired understandings
Attempting to become intimate in order to feel real
Encircling metaphors,
Abstracting elements of our existence
Through vagueness and pictures too ideal
Killing slowly reasoning in our minds
Wanting fervently
Pleading privately
Thinking silently
Of why we are alive....
Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2005
Comments on "Incognito"
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
This is a shift, a momentous one indeed, it is more and less at the same time...you begin to show far more than any give you credit for *mountains too high* thats what virtue feels like when your surrounded by mud
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
I know you see the profundity in everything, and the mediocrity and the mundane...thinking incessantly why oh why are we alive...i've sunk to deep, i know not where we go from here
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
I could read your words for hours, just soak in them and delve as deep as i might...in awe...
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Anth
(1126) wrote:
i too see in this what solace does, and wish that i could not,but where emptiness is found beneath the surfaces, imagination completes the blur, the gaze is turned inwards. this is truly well written, has a different feel from your other recent works,
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Anth
(1126) wrote:
"pictures too ideal" impacted me the most cos i know what you mean ....this delves deeper,and thus the desolation becomes all to real, as if digging deeper to find what becomes a burden, terrible knowledges
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Anth
(1126) wrote:
In places too fond of the way time despairingly speaks , this line distinctly reminded me of norway