Forbidden

By Sky Singer

you whisper unspoken words
so softly and so sweetly that
my soul has to bend it's ear
to hear the melody

and you hold me
wiht such intensity and intimacy that
my heart falls to it's knees
whenever you are near

but every sunrise has it's downfall
every word has it's antonym
and every embrace has it's release

you whisper these unspoken words to me
so sincerely and so secretly
simply because we both know that
we are merely reminders to one another
of what we will never have




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Copyright 2005 Jessica Anne Wolfe
Published on Friday, April 1, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • KuroiBara On Monday, February 16, 2009, KuroiBara (16)By person wrote:

    Love...you will never have true love, at least that's what you think. And what you are describing, is a crush.

  • stormtalk On Tuesday, July 26, 2005, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    On a small grammatical note, those "it's"'s should all be "its." Other than that... not bad at all. Not my favorite of yours, either, but still better than the average write. Who's M?

  • Sky Singer On Wednesday, August 31, 2005, Sky Singer (153)By person wrote:

    yeah my grammar is terrible ^-^. "m" is a very dear friend... he still comes around every now and then... i want to write a story that somewheat mirrors (and more or less explain) our past 5 years, but that's going to take some time, in the writing and em

  • Sky Singer On Wednesday, August 31, 2005, Sky Singer (153)By person wrote:

    --emotional process.

  • The Crimson Queen On Monday, April 4, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    simply amazing...that first stanza just captivated me

  • K_Love On Friday, April 1, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    I agree with Alacer, really pure and truthful write. Lovely job, sweetly beautiful.

  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Friday, April 1, 2005, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    very well spoken. such pure thought and emotion. A_C


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