*LOOK* at me!

By Black_Cherry_Doll_

Turn your back
Like you've always done
You never want to see me
It's all about you!
Look at this guilt trip you've cornered
Me into.
And I let you do all this.
I let this become the norm

Just listen to me!!
Im so fucked up
But you'll never know
I need help and I can't
Leave it alone

So beautiful on the outside
But dirty dying and rotted inside
You see only what you want
And I am nothing

I just want to let it all go

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Copyright 2005 Black_Cherry_Doll_
Published on Monday, March 21, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: painful and so real, the tragedy of being apparent, of searching for eyes, of needing to be seen, and remaining invisible... very nice

  • Omalleyjr On Saturday, May 21, 2005, Omalleyjr (22)By person wrote:

    i can so relate

  • blue On Monday, March 21, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    ya well, sometimes we need to scream inside to make a sound on the outside...great stuff Steph! ~b

  • Forgotten Angel On Monday, March 21, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    i can relate..great write! keep up the good work! :D -Kel

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