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my kurupt mind
By mysticventures
I can see
into your mind
and I know your thoughts
I can see
into your dreams
and I know your fantasies
I can see
into your heart
and I know your desires
I can see
into your soul
and I know we are one
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Copyright 2005 mysticventures
Published on Monday, March 14, 2005.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
The point of this poem is short but amazing, it kind of just hits you in the last three lines, excellent work
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On Thursday, October 6, 2005, vaultgrl
(185)
wrote:
....i love the way of your words.....great write.....beautiful
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, Northstar
(374) wrote:
peaceful yet penetrating---these are words every good sub would love to hear *wink*
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On Monday, March 14, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
wonderfully done...absolutely beautiful ...
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On Monday, March 14, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
lovely from the first line to the last...i love your works ~kristy
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On Monday, March 14, 2005, manywalks
(747) wrote:
a perfect cadence for a perfect little read, simplistic and beautiful. ~ wen
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