The Blur of Reality
By steuss
With the plastic gone from my eyes,
the light of life becomes blurred,
sensation and reality only corrupted.
Is any of it real?
Man talks about letters long written;
The dreams of sunsets
flown.
Questions long to fill some sequential
Order to the
reality of Living.
And darkness intrudes all.
But that
glimmer of imagination,
Alters events happened in different Lights,
Different sounds,
Will my voice change the winds of
Tomorrow?
Or the passage of the Sun?
Perhaps my sneezes will force the
sun
to rise in the West one day...
And still, looking forward
into the
Myth of history, the altered visions of dreaming
Poets saw a different past,
And created for them, ourselves,
Corrupted lights from Angels unseen.
The Blur of life is a
certainty,
That it isn't truly there.
Life is a dream, the
colors only
Weaves of our own imagination,
All swirling in
chaos,
Attempting to be conformed to our minds...
Comments on "The Blur of Reality"
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A former member wrote:
"Will my voice change the winds of Tomorrow? Or the passage of the Sun". Jesus. This is divine. The tone is so peaceful. Wonderous and sincere. A marvel of a work- Rose.
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A former member wrote:
Put together a book so I can buy it.
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A former member wrote:
you are an amazing poet!
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On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
oh wow...im speechless...blown away by the wit&wisdom of such work...wow...
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A former member wrote:
this poem is so unique, and i love it. the wording through-out the poem was so appropriate and sophistocated. nicely done. .....-samone
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On Tuesday, March 1, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
i love the whole second stanza, this reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe's A dream within a dream....loved it! ~kristy