Dead end dreams
By VenomPlease
T h e d a y s
Are getting shorter
and the nights are getting l o n g e r
There's people getting lonely
But there's n o o n e getting stronger
And the Rolling Stone's not what it used to be
Your face on the cover
Like the a c e of fucking spades
A lonely game of solitaire can't seem to ease the pain
of f i v e empty souls
Lost and on the brink of disaster
Some kind of disaster
R e a d y to break us all
There is no r e m e d y
for adolescence and naivety
but blood for tears and
Dead
end
d r e a m s
The Sunset Strip aint what it used to be
Some voice
echoing off the walls
Like the sound of my g u i t a r
Play louder to drown out the noise
of the world coming d o w n around me
The world
i s c o m i n g d o w n a r o u n d m e
There is no escape from these
Dead
end
d r e a m s
Comments on "Dead end dreams"
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A former member wrote:
Unique play of words! I loved it! :) thank you for sharing - and nice flow.
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A former member wrote:
well versed, well said... well done?
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On Friday, August 10, 2007, NapoleonsLust
(16) wrote:
this was fun to read, those Stones aint the same no more...NL
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On Thursday, February 24, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
ahhh...excellent! wonderfully written and such a coolness to the flow....kick ass write yet again my friend. you rock.
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On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
beautifully done! i love your way with words. awesome write
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
Well written piece... Great emotion conveyed... However... I am the antidote... I ride a white horse too you see... Miraculous Ecstatic Paradise, Seth
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, Green-eyed Raven
(54) wrote:
Beautiful write. *Raven*
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A former member wrote:
cool
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A former member wrote:
The heaviness of this piece is felt deeply...each line added a tear ending with a tidal wave. I'm so sorry to see this kind of pain in your heart...excellent expression from your pen and soul
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, Cinn
(152) wrote:
I really like this one. I love the way it sounds. Awesome poem by far. -Cinn
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
I've missed your writing, this was beautiful in every way possible. The form complimented the poem wonderfully, The ending was amazing. Great job, well written.