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The Other Lover
By October Death
Do you think of her while you're kissing me?
Do you think of her at night,
While we're tangled in the aftermath of our lust and need?
I know you despise me.
So why do you stay?
Because we look good together?
Because it's expected of you?
We're trapped in a spider web of lies, affairs, and deceit.
I'm not strong enough to lose you yet.
Let her go.
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Copyright 2005 October Death
Published on Friday, February 11, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
WOW This is an amazing peice of words together!Very well enjoyed!
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917)
wrote:
painful write...well done..and as for that pain, at least it gives you something to write about huh?
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On Friday, February 11, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
Wonderful write Chelsea. I can totally relate. ~Unlucky a.k.a Sara :)
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, October Death
(18) wrote:
Sara! I just went through all your poems. And they. Are. Really good. You're an awesome writer, you have real talent and I'm glad you're putting it to use in something you love.
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On Friday, February 11, 2005, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
What miserable sadness this conjures up.. well written.. well done.. -Michael
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On Friday, February 11, 2005, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
a dark and forboding valentine............well spoken.......urban
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