Blind Love (I'm So Weak)

By October Death

The blade dances across my skin

My wounds glare at me accusingly

Look what you do to me

As my hurt fades away,

I lay, silent.

My emotions drip away from my skin.

I'm so fucking weak.

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Copyright 2005 October Death
Published on Wednesday, January 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Great write. It shows the thoughts and anger afterwards.

  • A former member wrote: I have felt that way so many times.. But I do not call it weakness. I wish I was stronger, emotionally, but it isn't weakness. --beautiful

  • A former member wrote: Terrific

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