Confused

By October Death

Your October beauty is

mistaken December lust.

Come back to the security blanket.

There is nothing for you there.

Only red ice with black promises.

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Copyright 2005 October Death
Published on Wednesday, January 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Well Written Good Peice Of Writing Write There : )

  • A former member wrote: good with words vrery deep too

  • A former member wrote: Kool ~~GOTHIC~~

  • Chimauron On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, Chimauron (87)By person wrote:

    "red ice with black promises"... sounds decidedly ghoulish. Excellent choice of words, and a great visual. Welcome :)

  • A former member wrote: Simple but sweet :) --beautiful

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