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Where I have waited....
By Spiritus_Frumenti
Where I have waited,
Shadow/dreams stand there
Below a forgotten sky
On a ground sinking,
A ground that perhaps has had enough
Within seasons wanting to be felt
Winds are changing,
As men are chasing leaves holding secrets
In paths of surrender,
All that is true becomes empty
Where every thought no longer seems real
I feel an abandon,
An unrelenting solitude larger than this world
Existing in lands beyond the farthest cliffs
By the horizons of colliding dreams
And eternally bleeding Suns
In many ways,
I now find myself devoid of contemplation
Out of Admiration -
to the bitter/beautiful of where I am
An air that is insulted by my presence
Where my suffering means nothing
This primordial essence,
In all the sweets and sorrows,
Is where I have waited all along...
Copyright 2005 Juan Antonio Thomas
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Copyright 2005 Spiritus_Frumenti
Published on Thursday, January 13, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Where I have waited...."
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A former member wrote:
very searchingly unfurled.... i love the full circle this ride fulfills, and i wish i could find myself waiting in any primordial place... pristine or no. Exquisite!!
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On Saturday, January 22, 2005, Anth
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wrote:
this was a painful read, though beautifully expressed,
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On Friday, January 14, 2005, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
elegant melancholia... you express this so stylishly... "Within seasons wanting to be felt" - gorgeous line. Lovely write.
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