I Wish...

By Whisper

I wish...
I could express myself,
and hold you in my arms.

I wish...
I could hear your voice saying
"everything will be fine."

I wish...
I could look upon your face
without my heart breaking.

I wish...
you hadn't left me,
and we were still together.

I wish...
I could go through life
without missing you.

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Copyright 2004 Matt Martin
Published on Thursday, December 30, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mylissa On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    A deep miss, so hard, written so beautifully.

  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, April 17, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Such a sweet write. ~*~Tart~*~

  • Serenity On Friday, April 8, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Beautiful write

  • ShardsofSilence On Tuesday, January 18, 2005, ShardsofSilence (219)By person wrote:

    exactly what has been on my mind as of late..i love this. awesome write.

  • stormtalk On Sunday, January 9, 2005, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    These sound like the wishes people make silently when the clock hits 1:11 or 2:22, or when they notice the first star of the night, or when someone offers them their eyelash to blow away...

  • The Crimson Queen On Friday, January 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    been there.....nice descriptive write.. ~angel

  • Storm On Thursday, December 30, 2004, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    hrm, anyways, I just wanted to compliment on this being a very good poem describing things very well. ~

  • Storm On Thursday, December 30, 2004, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    The pain of being the one left can seem unbearable, and it can make you forget that you will if not forget then move on.. eventually, just as long as one holds on to what is one self and don't drift..

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