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My broken heart
By rondant
I was so happy
Happy and free
When it was us
Just you and me
But then you dumped me
And left me alone
Deep in the dark
Where my sorrow could be shone
I knew it would end
With a broken heart
But I didn't think
ThatI would fall apart
Crying with such saddness
Deeply in pain
While you stand there
Watching in vein
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Copyright 2004 rondant
Published on Thursday, December 16, 2004.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "My broken heart"
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A former member wrote:
simplistic but very expressive/emotive - relatable, easy to read, comforting and haunting in the rhythm of it, i'm sure many relate!
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917)
wrote:
pain expressed well in this piece...i know how you feel as well..~AoD
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On Monday, January 31, 2005, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
Oh god, I know that feeling all too well. The pain is very clear in this poem. Very well written.
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On Friday, January 7, 2005, Draven
(45) wrote:
hey man i know what you mean, but it will get better one day
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A former member wrote:
Love hurts. ~Shane~
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On Wednesday, December 29, 2004, JiNx
(98) wrote:
*agrees with frozen* broken hearts will some day mend... *huggles* great write.. -JiNx(ie)
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A former member wrote:
broken hearts in time heal very sweet write.
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A former member wrote:
i know what you mean. good write. i felt it
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