SubMissiOn!

By Black_Cherry_Doll_

You found another way to make me
Die. You found a way to kill my soul.
You bring me closer to the edge.
I'm getting weak.
You never need me
And I will still love you
Even when you leave me.
I will still adore you.
When you leave me weak and broken,
You murder me softly at night.
Whispering words of love that
Betray what your eyes reveal.
You never need me
I can't deny you.

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Copyright 2004 Black_Cherry_Doll_
Published on Tuesday, December 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Shows the true aspect of hearts want for necessarity when others don't show it.

  • Dei On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    yes. indeed. This is a marvolouse piece! Im impressed

  • A former member wrote: i cant deny you....beautiful and brilliant work!

  • A former member wrote: incredible. -zay

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