*STILL UNTITLED!*

By Black_Cherry_Doll_

Why do I set myself up for
This time and time again?
I am your stupid little whore
And I know this just has to end.

It hurts to know I am nothing
To you.
All the times you hurt me; it's numbing.
But I hope I'll make it through.

You were always right,
I want you to know.
It was silly to think I'd ever hold you through the night.
I didn't know you could make me feel so low.

You're hard to let go,
Lord knows I've tried.
All those lies on me you bestowed.
All those times inside I died.

I know this is hard,
And you're just as scared as me.
Put down your guard,
Just let things be.

I'm sorry I've held on so tight,
When you're struggling to be free of me.
So I'll seperate the black from white,
And let you keep my sanity.

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Copyright 2004 Black_Cherry_Doll_
Published on Tuesday, December 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • blue On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    Oh, Steph, this was at once delicate and brutal...loved the ending! Great write hun! Chyu! ~b

  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    thanks for the feedback guys, I do appreciate it---steph

  • A former member wrote: your writing is very deep. i love this poem...i can relate to what you wrote completely.

  • A former member wrote: i love this poem...you have a talent for letting the reader into your soul...this poem is exceptional. -zay

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