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By rondant

My time on earth was short and sweet
There were so many people I didn't get a chance to meet
I was going to be famous, did'nt you know
But I guess that's the way life goes
It happened so fast that horrible night
You wanted to race, so I held on tight
You must feel bad because I died
Tell me, was it worth your pride?
If you would of listened to what I said
I wouldn't be lying in this coffen dead
It's been a year to this very day
You kneal at my grave and begin to pray
I know you wouldn't of raced if you knew
And I hope you know that I forgive you.




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Copyright 2004 rondant
Published on Sunday, December 5, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Great Piece!

  • Silent Assassin On Sunday, December 5, 2004, Silent Assassin (108)By person wrote:

    Yeah, it sucks the way life goes. I can fully relate to this.

  • A former member wrote: Life's a 4-letter word, along with love, along with time. Given time, you'll heal. ~Shane~

  • A former member wrote: great work

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