Alone

By Spiritus_Frumenti

I am the one,
Who pursues an ideal, an essence,
Lying immutable in the distance
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Alone I will interpret,
Why the past extends farther than the future
Why there is abandon among desire,
And why there are fires in places that do not rain
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Alone I will wander,
Where the oceans meet the horizon,
Witnessing the clouds descend,
Followed by a sky falling without a reason
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Alone I will wonder,
How it's possible to bury your own God,
In cemeteries of sentiments,
Kneeling with flowers in your hands
Wanting to pray, knowing there is no one to hear you
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Alone I will ponder,
What is behind every movement of the wind
If this is where our whispers reside
Along with every will to understand,
Why the sad and the beautiful feel so close together
Why the tears of a birth and a funeral
cannot be told apart...

Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2004

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Copyright 2004 Spiritus_Frumenti
Published on Tuesday, November 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Amazingly beautiful...:)

  • A former member wrote: Good write

  • Jaded Jezzabelle On Friday, February 4, 2005, Jaded Jezzabelle (328)By person wrote:

    I really love this.....this is something that should be published and read and heard on an international level.

  • shadowsinthelight On Tuesday, December 21, 2004, shadowsinthelight (146)By person wrote:

    You are a philosopher, if you ever find out the answers to these questions, let me know. S. PS When you pray there is one who hears, yourself.

  • Solace On Thursday, December 9, 2004, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    This is untouchable by anything, you are not alone, but the feeling won't cease despite that...we struggle, we moths by the flame...those that ponder are of greater stuff than those who never wonder...

  • Solace On Thursday, December 9, 2004, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    This is truly great art, truly of the mindscape that you alone can propound, I bow before your efforts, for they are worthy...Thank You...

  • Anth On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    utterly flawless,sweeping,the mind is somewhat quietened when reading your works,like snow covering a fire,it flows so well,delicate yet with crushing power,i truly loved this write

  • Kali Ma On Tuesday, November 23, 2004, Kali Ma (43)By person wrote:

    Very deep and moving. I love it. ~ Kali Ma

  • A former member wrote: "Alone I will wonder, How it's possible to bury your own God, In cemeteries of sentiments, Kneeling with flowers in your hands..." Reflective & faultless, you cease to fail me.

  • Sin On Tuesday, November 23, 2004, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    as always your writes leave me mystified, its as if in a dream where everything is so vivid ~kristy

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