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The most Beautiful...Melancholy
By Spiritus_Frumenti
[ I am the recipient of nothing, gathering misfortunes,
Walking through atmospheres of love and decay ]
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The whispers of silence,
Call to reconcile my mind with torn visions of actuality
Known only through monotone escapes within airs
of approaching sunlight
Yet assuming a distant countenance,
So lost to my will and perceptions
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In skies of black,
I pray for the salvation of the stars,
For the arrival of a greater God
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So much about being alive feels like eternity,
Stagnant,
Where everything seems to be resting without me
Thinking of existence in different ways
If perhaps I am alive because the Sun saw me, instead
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In these longings of magnificent measures,
All of life seems irrelevant
When all I want to do is stare into the dark
When all I want to do is die right here....
Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2004
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Copyright 2004 Spiritus_Frumenti
Published on Thursday, November 11, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The most Beautiful...Melancholy"
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A former member wrote:
Holy shit man "So much about being alive feels like eternity,
Stagnant" If I could agree with this any more I might possible implode. Fucking amazing stanza and incredible all the way through. ~Ship!
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On Saturday, November 20, 2004, Solace
(1069)
wrote:
Oh gods and gods again, this is like the wind before the reaper himself comes to take away your love...Melancholy, you said it and I shall not disagree...
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
your quandry is like no other i have heard......it is sedate...wise....and far reaching, your articulation gives a home to my wandering emotions.......so very well done....................urban
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
"Where everything seems to be resting without me" - i love this line especially. Somehow, it seems to encapsulate a lot of the feelings I get from this write. And the title couldn't more accurately express this piece. :) Lovely.
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
The end...it left me torn. Short comment, and cliche, but here it is. Fucking awesome.
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
no one conveys such things quite like you,another spiritus classic
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A former member wrote:
It was wordy and distant, but I suppose thats how melancholy should be portrayed.
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, ShadowFlight
(105) wrote:
the ending kind of grabbed me... this one wasn't over yet... very well put, solid, yet moving at the same time.
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A former member wrote:
This is most beautiful, indeed...gripping and calming, somehow. Enchanting work.
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