Revelation

By rondant

Tell me what's been going on
How did our love go so wrong?
My head is spinning round and round
I fell like my feet aren't on the ground
I know i've made some mistakes
'Cause it's written all over your face
I looked into your hollow eyes
And I'm searching for a sign
All the things i'm looking for
My heart can't seem to find
Thewre can't be a happy ending
When we never really had a beginning
Maybe another time, another day
As much as I want to, I just can not stay
You need to know that love is not a possesion
And you need to learn that love needs expression
But it's already to late
Because my love won't wait
It's never easy letting go
'Cause the healing heart is so slow
I look away and close the curtain
My final act is still uncertain

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Copyright 2004 rondant
Published on Saturday, November 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Silent Assassin On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Silent Assassin (108)By person wrote:

    No, it is never easy to let go. It's the hard thing in the world.

  • A former member wrote: I think of the Beach Boys as I read this! ~Shane~

  • A former member wrote: Help me, Ronda! Help! Help me Ronda!...

  • rondant On Friday, November 19, 2004, rondant (58)By person wrote:

    I hate that song!!!

  • WinterGrave On Saturday, November 6, 2004, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    wow, like ripping fleash from bone, wonderfuly done.~~~Grave

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