Dying Man's Prayer

By Munkey

Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep
I Pray My Soul To No-one To Keep
I Hope To Die Before I Wake
Cuz The Pain Is More Then I Can Take

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Copyright 2004 Munkey
Published on Monday, November 1, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • SluG On Sunday, March 6, 2005, SluG (35)By person wrote:

    Hey chance, awesome, I like the way you put it into your own words. -S.

  • A former member wrote: LET THE DYING MAN DIE! Good write, Munkey! ~Shane~

  • sIo On Monday, November 1, 2004, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    i agree with stalker you want it to seem the same as the original...just morbid and intriguing...i like it alot.

  • SilentStalker On Monday, November 1, 2004, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...cute offbeat of the original...don't ask me why, but I like it...I have a suggestion, though... Scholar

  • SilentStalker On Monday, November 1, 2004, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...the second line is offbeat...how about 'I pray my soul for none to keep'...? and the same for the fourth line; just kill of the 'cuz'...not only will it give it perfect rhythm, but it just might appeal more to others... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: MANN FUKK DAT SON DU YA THANG ALL DAT PROPER SHIT STAYED IN SCHOOL GOOD WRITE MUNKEY-PERSEVERANCE- Scholar

  • SilentStalker On Monday, November 1, 2004, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...then again, I talk out of my ass a lot...like I said, merely a suggestion... -Stalker Scholar

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