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Dying Man's Prayer
By Munkey
Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep
I Pray My Soul To No-one To Keep
I Hope To Die Before I Wake
Cuz The Pain Is More Then I Can Take
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Copyright 2004 Munkey
Published on Monday, November 1, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, March 6, 2005, SluG
(35)
wrote:
Hey chance, awesome, I like the way you put it into your own words. -S.
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A former member wrote:
LET THE DYING MAN DIE! Good write, Munkey! ~Shane~
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On Monday, November 1, 2004, sIo
(926) wrote:
i agree with stalker you want it to seem the same as the original...just morbid and intriguing...i like it alot.
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On Monday, November 1, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...cute offbeat of the original...don't ask me why, but I like it...I have a suggestion, though...
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On Monday, November 1, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...the second line is offbeat...how about 'I pray my soul for none to keep'...? and the same for the fourth line; just kill of the 'cuz'...not only will it give it perfect rhythm, but it just might appeal more to others...
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A former member wrote:
MANN FUKK DAT SON DU YA THANG ALL DAT PROPER SHIT STAYED IN SCHOOL GOOD WRITE MUNKEY-PERSEVERANCE-
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On Monday, November 1, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...then again, I talk out of my ass a lot...like I said, merely a suggestion... -Stalker
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