Her Beauty

By stuart_pid

She walks within the nightmare
of her ever present past.
Devoured by a shadow
of the pain from which it's cast.
Bending at the fear
that stirs instinctively inside,
resonating softly
through the eyes she tries to hide.

The hand of understanding's
gentle touch has found her cold.
Distorted by the distance
that her desperation holds.
Running from the demons
in the darkness of her heart.
Keeping it together
as she slowly falls apart.

The horror of her story
is reflected on her face.
Her hollow stares of sorrow
and her soft seductive grace.
The subtle wash of tears
across the contours of her cheeks.
Expressions of discoloration
racing from defeat.

Over time the scars have faded
from the surface of her skin.
The pain remains, however,
still tormenting her within.
It pierces through my very nerves
caressing every thought.
I long to take it all away
but find that I cannot.

Her beauty isn't simply bound
by measures pre-defined.
It's deeper than the shallow standards
seared into our minds.
It's more than merely physical
attributes to the flesh.
While unapparent to the eyes
exquisite nonetheless.

Beneath her bridled misery,
behind her silent cries,
you'll find her fragile soul
and there is where her beauty lies.
It shines from every angle of her being
even though
how beautiful she is to me
she'll probably never know.

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Copyright 2004 Ken Ashby
Published on Sunday, October 24, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Very beautiful!

  • BoldSolitude On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    so elegantly expressed, a love poem that has substance and doesn't sound like a sappy love poem, well done

  • A former member wrote: -side by running rapidly. Beautiful. ~ Rose.

  • A former member wrote: "Beneath her bridled misery, behind her silent cries, you'll find her fragile soul and there is where her beauty lies" ~ your words are eloquent, graceful and utterly captivating, laden with an enchanting and alluring mist and I can only reach the other s

  • Zhee On Monday, October 25, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    an absolutely elegant piece...seems carved out perfectly from the most sincere of emotions... i loved the 2nd and 2nd last stanza.. wonderful flow.. brilliant write! *bravo*

  • purr_verse On Monday, October 25, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    what a truly beautiful piece. the second-last stanza is absolutely gorgeous. And your metre/rhyme/cadence is just outstanding. wonderful write.

  • A former member wrote: This was emotional and beautiful. I really wish you'd write more. I always enjoy your the wording and concept you show. Brilliant write, sweets.

  • girlafraid On Sunday, October 24, 2004, girlafraid (480)By person wrote:

    that was wonderful...once again, the flow and the rhyming only add to the overall feel of the piece...you have a talent for that...makes me want to start rhyming again...

  • elisa On Sunday, October 24, 2004, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    such a defining outline of Beauty...very Beautiful:) elisa

  • A former member wrote: "The hand of understanding's gentle touch has found her cold" that's a powerful line for me, stuart, well put indeed. awesome write.

  • A former member wrote: beautiful....the ending was a door -macker: strong and sad...very nice work

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