Picture Perfect Betty.

By Amanda Parnell

Picture perfect Betty,
Preserved in hand blown glass.
Was put upon display today,
to the public mass.

Many had passed with their
"Oh's and Awes...",
Others just stare
in wonder.

How could such a beauty
hold such a smile,
While showing
her chips
of a broken past,
laid upon this
hand blown glass?


Over time this
masterpiece
had been tossed around,
mistreaded.

Every slip of the
uncautious hand
droped her
to break into cracks.

Critics made their
judgements to quickly,
letting everyone know,
that this was not a
work of art,
how could she show so
much heart?

And with every word,
chipping her slowly away,
falling around her like dust.


One things will always
remain,
a tear of a broken past.

It lies next to her,

like a mystery
to always last.

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Copyright 2004 QueenKittensEyes
Published on Wednesday, October 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: *picks up pieces and hands them to you* this was sad but i know the pain in this one verry well.this was a teriffic write..u r an awsome poet!

  • Jonas On Wednesday, October 13, 2004, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    a picture of the femenine mystique to be sure... very nicely rendered, at that.

  • Zhee On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this was really sad.. and very beautifully described...very well done!

  • BeautifulCalamity On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    i agree with everyone, beautifully done.and yes, very sad... its sad how some people dont really know what true beauty is... great write

  • A former member wrote: Very powerful...Beautifully written!!!*ScandaL*

  • Drea On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    This is beautifully sorrowful. I love the flow. Wonderful as always.

  • Angst Queen On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    oh queenie this is beautiful

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