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the waltz (a haiku)
By mysticventures
Each one wants to lead
Stepping on each others toes
In the waltz of life
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Wednesday, October 6, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Oh wow... This actually leaves me speechless.
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, blue
(1454)
wrote:
Kakko ii !!! that was so cool, a wonderful write!! B
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
so very true...such a universal concept
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A former member wrote:
Cool haiku! the simple lines tell all that need to be known, like a whisper in your head gently saying those few words... great! by the way, I see that you listen to Moody Blues! :) I am a big fan of theirs!
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A former member wrote:
I wrote about a field of grass damnit! How am I supposed to compete.
Well done MV. :)
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A former member wrote:
So simple and so true. Lovely.
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A former member wrote:
exactly!!!*SmileZ*Wonderful expression!!!
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On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
soooo true... i agree you can capture a flood in a tear...truly wonderful work!
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On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Very Cool Haiku. Thanks. GPhD.
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On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
what can i say, but wonderful. A_C
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On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
How is it you can say so much with so little.. I guess that is why they call it talent.. and you obviously have it. Killer work.. love the insight. -Michael
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On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
I'm happy to be led by a beautiful dancer any day...
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