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and on and on and on (a haiku)
By mysticventures
Softly my soul sings
The song of eternity
And the beat goes on
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Thursday, September 30, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "and on and on and on (a haiku)"
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A former member wrote:
Not usually my style, but l did enjoy this one
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On Sunday, October 3, 2004, lordshadow
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wrote:
haikus are kind of risky and definitely hard to get right, but you pulled it off flawlessly and without much effort to get your point across while sticking to the format... very nice.
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A former member wrote:
i have to agree with everybody else. short, simple, nicely done, and very delicate. beautiful but simplistic piece!
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A former member wrote:
! Bravo
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Delicate and sweet.. very nicely done. -Michael
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
so short and simple.. but , very well done to say the least..i really like this ;> lovely work
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A former member wrote:
Mm. :)
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this says so much... i am still following all the places my mind is going with this ...:)
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