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picture of the mind
By toy soldier
Wraped in the solitude of night,
I can feel poetry flowing through my veins.
Yearning,
pleading,
no… screaming to be let free,
unbound,
to live again.
Yet held deep within my own darkness,
with only the moon to guide my ink in to the unknown depths of paper,
I lack the works to describe this feeling,
this state of mind,
this short lived view of life.
In all simplicity,
it is
simply poetic.
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Copyright 2004 toy soldier
Published on Wednesday, September 29, 2004.
Filed under:
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A former member wrote:
this is absolutly the most incredible poem i think i've ever read. I know this feeling all too well and no matter what i said i never found the words to say what i wanted about it.
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A former member wrote:
You have captured this feeling in a poetic snap shop, perfect - Much respect M.R.
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On Monday, January 10, 2005, stormtalk
(729)
wrote:
"Simply poetic," indeed. Perhaps not the most original subject matter, but, instead, a feeling to which we can all relate... keep writing... you'll find the words.
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A former member wrote:
Words are bullets. You've chosen them well. Thank you.
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On Saturday, October 23, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
This is a good way to put it...simply poetic. Very beautiful ending, soldier.
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On Sunday, October 17, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
From one soldier to another... simply awesome.
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, Butterfly
(99) wrote:
This is great. You're an awesome poet. And you have no Idea. Great write.
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
a wonderful poem explaining what ever poet goes threw, well done.~~~Grave
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Very beautifully done. Excellent write. -Michael
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A former member wrote:
This stole my breath. Excellent.
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was beautiful.. i wrote a poem abt something similar... reminded me of that.. but this was superb!
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