180

By ColdScaredAlone


Because everything feels wrong
As I fade into the ntoes
Of this symphony I've composed
Squeeze Me.
Every last drop
Flavor lost
Words used
Repeated
Are me
Am I
Should Be
Everything feels wrong
In a world of right
As I fade into the notes
Of the symphony I've composed
Grow out
Shed my skin
And crawl away
Soak it in
As I cook
Because
No one likes unflavored meat
Fade away
Into the notes
Of the symphony that is me.



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Copyright 2004 ColdScaredAlone
Published on Saturday, September 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: No comments? I love the way this twists and turns, like a violin solo, the bow weaving back and forth....

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