desire

By stuart_pid

A slave to the world
and a slave to yourself.
Searching for happiness.
Searching for wealth.
Searching unsatisfied,
driven by lust.
Endlessly searching
for more than enough.
Searching uncertain
the life that you want,
but pursuing with avarice
the things you have not.
It's pushing and pulling you.
Violently holding you.
Making you,
breaking you,
taking control of you.
Calling you softly
from somewhere inside,
where greed and desire
is all you will find.
It only gets stronger
the more you give in,
until all other senses
wear leeringly thin.
When the you that you knew
becomes drastically changed
and desire for freedom
is all that remains.

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Copyright 2004 Ken Ashby
Published on Wednesday, September 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Saturday, November 18, 2017, Just Dave (458)By person wrote:

    Holy shit. Love it. Great write. Great flow too. JD

  • A former member wrote: Really good poem it made me think about my friends and how I can relate to it.

  • BoldSolitude On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    really good write, I totally relate the last four lines really finish it off well.

  • purr_verse On Thursday, September 23, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    "Endlessly searching for more than enough" - i love this couplet especially. It's been said already but i'll still join the crowd: great metre, damn fine flow. enjoyed this ride all the way. great write!

  • girlafraid On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, girlafraid (480)By person wrote:

    this does have an excellent flow...are we ever really satisfied? most of the time i don't think we are...

  • Zhee On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    i absolutely loved the ending... wonderful work!!!parts of it reminded me something i wrote ,"do the tears move you, of all those you deprive, running with all the dead- are you still alive?" ..~zhee

  • A former member wrote: Perfectly worded, flowed so well and great rhyming. As for the content, very powerful feelings.. Wow, this is good. ~Wish Upon A Star

  • A former member wrote: "When the you that you knew becomes drastically changed and desire for freedom is all that remains." fuck yeah, great finish to a well done write. cool man.

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