[Fuck Me Tomorrow]
By Amanda Parnell
pull me back
push me harder
hold me close
then trash me tomorrow
[you'll never change
as all as you live,
this is something i
cannot give.]
love my body
hate my mind
throw my party
but leave me behind
[you'll never change
as all as you live,
this is something i
cannot give.]
tell me hello
fuck me goodbye.
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Copyright 2004 QueenKittensEyes
Published on Monday, September 20, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "[Fuck Me Tomorrow]"
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A former member wrote:
this was awsome..i like it alot expecially"tell me hello, fuck me goodbye" i kno that one..great write.it was seriously kick ass
~manda~
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A former member wrote:
This is still fucking amazing.. hasn't lost a bit of its power.. I miss you being around and posting..
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A former member wrote:
I'm baaaack.. Sadly I have lost my ability to write but I am hoping I can find it here.
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On Thursday, November 17, 2005, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Kick ass power write
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On Saturday, January 29, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
really great loved the last 2 lines -kitty
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On Friday, January 14, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
i loved this...the last two lines were just perfect
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
wonderful write, queenie. so many people think with the wrong mind, its heart breaking and annoying. you'll find some one that truely knows how to love someday, queen
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On Sunday, September 26, 2004, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
'love my body hate my mind', would that be a welcome change...
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A former member wrote:
Love the concept, and the last line. This wooshed by me by left a lingering feeling. Lovely.
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On Monday, September 20, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was raw and passionate.. loved it!
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A former member wrote:
very well done i like it alot
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On Monday, September 20, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
indeed, well done. i defer to anti-ephemeral, as (s)he sums it up
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On Monday, September 20, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
superb,so fast this felt,execution of emotion with a kind of brain surgeons precision
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A former member wrote:
intense hun....amazing
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A former member wrote:
...and then you blew me away.