dysphoria
By stuart_pid
Wheeling,
reeling,
fighting feelings.
Coming down, it's coming down.
Chasing,
racing,
horror facing.
Coming down, it's coming down.
And all at once it quickly rushes in
from all around you.
Grabbing you to drag you
through the darkness that surrounds you.
Dreading,
fretting,
fiercely sweating.
Coming down, it's coming down.
Waiting,
hating,
nauseating.
Coming down, it's coming down.
And when it catches up with you
the only thing you'll hear
is the subtle sounds of screaming
from the demons of despair.
Sighing,
crying,
vein denying.
Coming down, it's coming down.
Flashing,
smashing,
violent crashing.
Coming down, it's coming down.
Destroying all delusions
of the peace inside your mind.
Exposing almost instantly
the fear from which you hide.
It's coming down to show you
what the hollow darkness holds.
It's coming down and soon
it will be all you'll ever know.
Awards
Comments on "dysphoria"
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On Tuesday, May 10, 2005, VenomPlease
(134) wrote:
Wow these are so wonderful thoughts you have collected here. Excellent rhythm too. I love it
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On Tuesday, May 10, 2005, VenomPlease
(134) wrote:
*SOME wonderful thoughts*.... evidently I can't spell today
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On Thursday, March 17, 2005, yslehc
(334) wrote:
yyep i can relate as well... great write, one of my favs
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On Thursday, September 16, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was really wonderful.. i agree would make an awesome song.. has perfect flow...
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
this would make an excellent song. complete and compelling rhythm, with a flawless pace that drags the reader through; great write!
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A former member wrote:
wow I can relate to this in ways you will never know (if it means what I think it does and I'm pretty sure it does) this poem kicks ass I'm faving it
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
That was awesome... definitely my taste. I liked this very very much.