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from nobody to nobody
By stuart_pid
I wish I could have been there but I couldn't and I'm sorry.
I wish I would have seen you but I wouldn't and I'm sorry.
Another day is slipping by.
Another tear escapes my eye.
Another place is lost inside.
Another part of me has died.
I wish I could have told you but I couldn't and I'm sorry.
I wish I would have shown you but I wouldn't and I'm sorry.
Yesterday will never change.
Tomorrow is forever strange.
Things were always such a game
but things will never be the same.
I wish I could have helped you but I didn't and I'm sorry.
I wish I would have stopped you but I didn't and I'm sorry.
I didn't and I don't know why.
I didn't even really try.
But I'm sorry we can't find
the missing pieces left behind.
I wish you could forgive me but you can't and I am sorry.
I wish you could forget me but you can't and I am sorry.
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Copyright 2004 Ken Ashby
Published on Friday, September 10, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, August 26, 2012, Zhee
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wrote:
this just resonates with the heart strings...i wonder if you made this into a song? its's just beautiful...
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, SulaMoon
(67) wrote:
Another great write!
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On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, weyvern
(80) wrote:
I enjoyed this and I like the today tomorrow philosophy good one> oh and thanx for the comment X
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A former member wrote:
this a really good write....unique to
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A former member wrote:
Nicely done, I really enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading more of your work.
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A former member wrote:
i love the structure of this poem, and the title suits it so well. the way it's written makes your train of thought seem so far away, and solemn. you did a great job with this one.
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A former member wrote:
Wow the format in this was great. I really, really like the last two lines and especially the very last line. Excellent work. ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
Unusual . . the title dragged me in and the poem did not fail me . . original and strangely beautiful. A wonderful, wonderful write ~ Rose
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Stormcomin
(32) wrote:
This repetition is this is perfect. The subject and rhythm are wonderfully composed. What more can I say. Great work!
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On Monday, October 25, 2004, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
ach, I can really relate. Wonderfully written. Thank you.
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On Thursday, September 23, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
wow awesome write.. sounds great, nice job
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A former member wrote:
I loved this.. It's raw and not played up.. Niice.
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A former member wrote:
this is great. a different way to express something real to me also, and very well done at that, welcome to dp.
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A former member wrote:
wonderfully constructed,awesome flow, you have much talent
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
very different and original. I applaude you.
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
hmm...i like it.
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, Butterfly
(99) wrote:
Wow this is really good I like the flow of it. You don't see this type of scheme a lot. Nice write.
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