from nobody to nobody

By stuart_pid

I wish I could have been there but I couldn't and I'm sorry.
I wish I would have seen you but I wouldn't and I'm sorry.

Another day is slipping by.
Another tear escapes my eye.
Another place is lost inside.
Another part of me has died.

I wish I could have told you but I couldn't and I'm sorry.
I wish I would have shown you but I wouldn't and I'm sorry.

Yesterday will never change.
Tomorrow is forever strange.
Things were always such a game
but things will never be the same.

I wish I could have helped you but I didn't and I'm sorry.
I wish I would have stopped you but I didn't and I'm sorry.

I didn't and I don't know why.
I didn't even really try.
But I'm sorry we can't find
the missing pieces left behind.

I wish you could forgive me but you can't and I am sorry.
I wish you could forget me but you can't and I am sorry.

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Copyright 2004 Ken Ashby
Published on Friday, September 10, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Zhee On Sunday, August 26, 2012, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this just resonates with the heart strings...i wonder if you made this into a song? its's just beautiful...

  • SulaMoon On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, SulaMoon (67)By person wrote:

    Another great write!

  • weyvern On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, weyvern (80)By person wrote:

    I enjoyed this and I like the today tomorrow philosophy good one> oh and thanx for the comment X

  • A former member wrote: this a really good write....unique to

  • A former member wrote: Nicely done, I really enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading more of your work.

  • A former member wrote: i love the structure of this poem, and the title suits it so well. the way it's written makes your train of thought seem so far away, and solemn. you did a great job with this one.

  • A former member wrote: Wow the format in this was great. I really, really like the last two lines and especially the very last line. Excellent work. ~Ship!

  • A former member wrote: Unusual . . the title dragged me in and the poem did not fail me . . original and strangely beautiful. A wonderful, wonderful write ~ Rose

  • Stormcomin On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Stormcomin (32)By person wrote:

    This repetition is this is perfect. The subject and rhythm are wonderfully composed. What more can I say. Great work!

  • Lotophagi On Monday, October 25, 2004, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    ach, I can really relate. Wonderfully written. Thank you.

  • yslehc On Thursday, September 23, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    wow awesome write.. sounds great, nice job

  • A former member wrote: I loved this.. It's raw and not played up.. Niice.

  • A former member wrote: this is great. a different way to express something real to me also, and very well done at that, welcome to dp.

  • A former member wrote: wonderfully constructed,awesome flow, you have much talent

  • BleedSilver On Friday, September 10, 2004, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    very different and original. I applaude you.

  • Lord Kalgalath On Friday, September 10, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    hmm...i like it.

  • Butterfly On Friday, September 10, 2004, Butterfly (99)By person wrote:

    Wow this is really good I like the flow of it. You don't see this type of scheme a lot. Nice write.

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