Log In
Windblown Desert Sands
By mysticventures
Drifting Dunes Across the Land
Lonely Cactus Stands
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Friday, August 20, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Windblown Desert Sands"
Log in to post comments.
-
On Wednesday, September 13, 2006, Bluegirl
(177)
wrote:
this one has a very "empty" and "sad" feel to it. well done.
-
On Tuesday, August 31, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
reminds me of the sand dunes here next to me about 30 miles.. something like a spiritual moment or expirience.. awesome! *669*
-
A former member wrote:
this is good simple moving great imagery i see it good write ~Ends
-
On Monday, August 23, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
So deep but so simple...makes me want to simplify myself. -Munkey-
-
A former member wrote:
In Japanese, it's spelled 'hokku' w/an 'o'. Great job. With the title, I was almost misled into thinking of Iraq.
-
On Saturday, August 21, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
thanks guys - and yes it is Haiku
-
On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
i was gonna say haiku,but then i wasnt sure if i was technically correct,but yeah.lol
-
On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(353) wrote:
...I actually really like this....the flicker of an image,lasting just a moment...then dissappearing again as quickly as it seems to have come...I really did feel this....Butterfly..xxx...p.s....anth,are you referring to a haiku,by any chance?
-
On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
brilliant!!,reminded me of the small japanese poems,so perfect,and speaking volumes,i really like this one
-
On Saturday, August 21, 2004, elisa
(1595) wrote:
you can do a lot of thinking in deserts like these:) elisa
-
On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
hmmm this image stirs up several feelings/ideas in me---desolation, strength despite opposition, simplicity, a captured moment in time both moving and still
mysticventures's Latest Works Feed
Join