LOVE

By mysticventures



I am the ultimate power

High above all do I tower

I am eternally driven

And thus freely given

Over everything else do I rule

For I am the souls greatest tool

Given by those who would share

From cradle to grave I am there

I can fade through the years

And sometimes bring tears

But through me the heart always lifts

For I am the greatest of gifts

Many are my acts and expressions

Through me are learned life's greatest lessons

In the act of forgiveness I shine

For this act is truely divine

It is given without condition

With never a need for permission

No greater can be offered a soul

For I am that,

Which is what,

Makes you whole

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, August 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Savannah On Saturday, November 13, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    so very, very true

  • A former member wrote: Awesome...Very insightful and very well written!!!

  • A former member wrote: man everytime I read your works I feel like I'm goin to school. I always learn somethin. Good job

  • ONEANDLONELY On Tuesday, August 24, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (114)By person wrote:

    Unyeilding and unconditional...

  • A former member wrote: All you need is love. Love is all you need.

  • Mr King On Friday, August 20, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    So simple... So clear... So lit up... PURITY PERSONIFIED... 1, Seth

  • DarkWolf On Thursday, August 19, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    Beautifully written Mystic. I understand this one so well... I love the line "From cradle to grave I am there" I love this one. -Michael

  • A former member wrote: Interesting poem:) I like it

  • Graveyard_Desciple On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, Graveyard_Desciple (39)By person wrote:

    HOLY SHIT! this is awesome. very nice write!

  • NikesRain On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    ..the rhyme flows really nicely on this and the content evokes a great feeling. as Tim said very uplifting.

  • elisa On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    I take a wonderful lesson from this:) I love this thought. elisa

  • TheReap On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, TheReap (38)By person wrote:

    indeed - very moving - keep it up

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