linger

By mysticventures

these days I linger

a tormented soul

and long for that

which makes me whole

these day I wonder

thru the corridors of my mind

and long for the escape

I might never find

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Published on Sunday, August 15, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "linger"

On Sunday, August 15, 2004, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

absolutely brutal... i'm left puzzled but in peace with this feeling.. you're so extreamly talented.. never stop ~matt
On Sunday, August 15, 2004, elisa (1595) wrote:

A balance of hope and longing. very beautiful:) elisa
On Sunday, August 15, 2004, Storm (143) wrote:

soft indeed.. got the waves of someone who silently surrenders but keeps the hope of one day finding all the missing pieces. Soft and calm...
On Sunday, August 15, 2004, manywalks (747) wrote:

This flows soft through the mind, like a whisper nearly lost. Wonderful. ~ wen
On Sunday, August 15, 2004, mysticventures (527) wrote:

thanks for the correction krystal
On Sunday, August 15, 2004, GirlintheBox (41) wrote:

i like it...but only one thing is confusing me...when u say "these day", do u mean "this day" or "these days"? jw...great piece tho *krystal*
On Sunday, August 15, 2004, Northstar (374) wrote:

love it! flow is like an undertow that swept me right through this piece...and swept this piece right through me--nicely done