Santa Monica Sunset
By Zahgurim
A calm orange glow blankets the city
Comforts the ocean
As it needs to be comforted
For a tragedy has occured
A man too sad for words
With eyes so blue, they hide the cold
Imposes his mentality on others
physically
So washing clean
The tide pulls in
Women and children and men, with
other kin
They did everything wrong
Just didn't know it
Swaying with ease, there were
thousands of them
Salt in their veins
Strangled with seaweed
For them to end
There was plenty of need
Now the lovers in love
Even the casual lays
Hung up in trees
Inserted and sewn to each other
Like decorated angels with such
yule tide splendor
Cradled by the breeze
Even lookie-loo's of same gender
No one really knew
Or had time to even ponder
What drove him to this
How he managed to accomplish
such a feet
In fifty-eight seconds or less
This was a man without fear
When all he knew, were pain
and tears
Two miles east
On some useless street
Erected a church
Boy, Catholics are neat
Out on the green turf
Where daises grew
Fell ruffied-up nuns, raped with
very large guns
Protruding from their virgin
vaginal openings
If you look up above
You will find a most lonesome dove
Deficating on a crucified man
The man on the cross
Resembling a neo-Nazi boss, had
a neverending grin on his face
Jesus got a haircut today
A man too happy to use a pen
Supported by a symbol ment
to forgive your sins
With eyes so blue
Yet trusting and true
Where was your god today?
Comments on "Santa Monica Sunset"
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On Saturday, August 7, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
this stretched horizons ... the sun set yeah .... but where has it been? what did it cast light upon? the sun leaves insanity in its wake ... this was blue - eye hard core ... rediculously well done ... funguy
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On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
Very well written, great job! ~*~dayer~*~
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On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
When you see a car accident happen or someone jump off a building in an attempt to kill themselves, your life seems to stop just so you can revel in the "oh my god" feeling...same reaction, fabulously written *~seraph~*