Visions
By mysticventures
I am the divine spark
You see in your mother
your brother
your lover
For I am -
Love
I am the suckling foal
the evening tide
the thunderstorm
the rose
For I am -
Life
Manifest is all things
great and small
I am
That I am
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, August 3, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, May 23, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
love love love the universal solution; its great isnt it?
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A former member wrote:
This was simple yet elegant. You said a lot with few words. Very thought provoking, nicely done:) ~Ship!
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On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Zara Synn
(57) wrote:
Love the descriptions of Life; The evening tide and the rose - paints a beautiful picture.
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
you don't stop amazing me;) love the feel of this! *669*
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
its a kind of grand unified theory,of poitiveness and truth,and expressed in a manifestation that is without flaw,clear and brilliant
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx
(64) wrote:
fucking hell that was beautiful... there's something about your words here that were haunting. i love it.
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
lovely and serene...
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Mystic, ahhh, this was soft and near perfect. A calming piece to read. ~ wen
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
This is a very nice write. I love it. -BT-