Raging Torrents

By mysticventures



If a thought is like a ripple on a pond


Spreading ever wider from it's source


What torrents must rage -


Upon the still waters of my mind

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, August 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • PaperPromises On Monday, June 13, 2005, PaperPromises (54)By person wrote:

    So simple, yet it carries a beautiful depth, and I love it -Cor

  • sixsixnine On Friday, August 6, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    like always throwing me into a whole diffrent dimention.. i love your work & i love you *669*

  • Anth On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    cool.speaks for itself really,great work

  • AHHH On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, AHHH (187)By person wrote:

    wow...very deep...simple and deep - michelle

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