All Torn Up Over You
By mysticventures
There's not a part of your body
I wouldn't touch
You could chop off my hands
Yet still they would grope
Longing to touch your flesh and hold
Your firmness
There's not a part of your body
I wouldn't lick
You could cut out my tongue
And still it would moved of it's own accord
Over every square inch
of your lusciouness
There's not a part of your body
I wouldn't kiss
You could ripp off my lips
Still they would silently call your name
And remain succulent and moist
for your pleasure
There's not a part of your body
I wouldn't love
You could tear out my heart
And still it would beat for you
The heat of my passion
keeping it alive
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Wednesday, July 28, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
The blend of passion, pain, and desire merged perfectly
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On Sunday, February 11, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
absolutely lovely...
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
This is amazing. Very Beautiful. ~Sara
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On Friday, July 30, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
i feel the same ... over & over i keep thinking of you, & now after speaking to you ... over & over i want to be w/ you.... you'r an awesome soul.... with such talent.. it's only right *669*
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
I absolutely adore the concept of this.. the idea of being torn apart by this person, but still wanting them. Raw, passionate, a perfect and intelligent write. I'm deeply impressed by this.
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
oohhh I like this one a lot -- the way your desire/love/passion transcend your body, time and space is very beautiful
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A former member wrote:
interesting work. Love the last stanza. ~ Psychotic
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
Sometimes it's hard to capture passion, but you did a great job with this one.
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
I love this peace,I can feel the passion seeping off of this write.Nice -Lich-
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
just a flash of inspiration before work this morning- no comments necessary