You and I

By mysticventures

You and I -

Its like we are on opposite sides of the same mountain,

With neither having reached the summit as of yet.

Naturally, our views and perspectives will differ.

And that is ok.

For it is the climb itself that matters -

not the route

But do know this -

If I reach the top first,

I will offer my hand to help you up.

And hand in hand

We can stand together

And take in the view

As one

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, July 27, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Inspirational, not overly wordy, yet still filled to the brim. Becuase of the title I now have 'Anybody Listening' by Queensryche stuck in my head.

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    Echoing the wonderful anth.. a stunning write for sure, I adore what you've expressed through this, and how you've portrayed it. Breath taking and heart warming. Incredible work.

  • Anth On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    this is a stunning write,i so loved it,the imagery idea and weight of this is a mountainous display of talent,made me smile

  • Anth On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    and on my return to this write,its so awesome,uplifting cos i think of my love as i read it,and its just such a cool poem

  • sixsixnine On Tuesday, July 27, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    such talent.... again you strike me with deep love-filled poetry......* i love this* 669 *

  • A former member wrote: this is so beautiful. I could actually see this image in my head. Very sweet and descriptive write. ~serpentine~

  • elisa On Tuesday, July 27, 2004, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    Wow...I got a good picture of this poem in my mind...Beautiful:)

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