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Windows of My Mind
By mysticventures
Closed are the windows of my mind
for such as I keep, are not for prying eyes
To expose them would be to leave me naked and vulnerable
for those who would govern my life, may object to my tastes
And meet them with horror and disgust
and in their ignorance and fear, may seek to do me harm
Or even worse yet,
may try to change my tastes to suit their own
And just who are they anyway
to decide what gives me pleasure in my life?
Best I should just keep the shutters closed
besides-
they have their's closed as well
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Saturday, July 17, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, August 5, 2004, TheReap
(38)
wrote:
Who cares what peeps think - Everyone is a one of a kind - Good stuff!
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On Friday, July 30, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
excellent write, moves nicely and especially liked the truth in it's content. Only one person to please and that's your self. So nicely done.
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
i'm feeling this to but i'm so fucked i now have no windows to close.. so i'm just exposed * all my vise & what they dislike * all the pain is the only thing they care not to see, that they're causing me.. i ... love this piece.. it's like you're in me
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A former member wrote:
close minded bastards. i wouldnt change for a million dollars, and you shouldnt either. nice work
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On Saturday, July 17, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
thank you Northstar!
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On Saturday, July 17, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
I can really relate to the theme of this piece--excellent expression!
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