The Last Supper
By Syn
The table is set perfectly, not a utensil misplaced. The napkins neatly
folded, name cards appropriately placed. He's winding up the music box,
to let its song resound.
His ladies are sitting in their seats, ready for this delicious feast.
He approaches the table with the greatest of ease, not wanting to seem
overly anxious. He circles the table, slowly and kisses each lady gently
upon their head. His hand moves to stroke each one's locks so gently and
lovingly. He loves his ladies so greatly.
He looks at the scene, his women around the table, only visible in the
dingy half-light of the room. The sun is shining in only a little while
it is setting in the west. He notices a million dust particles in the
ray of light, making him uneasy, for this was supposed to be the perfect
dinner...He worked so hard to please them.
The room still has a hint of musty scent, he did his best to rid of it.
The smell he tried to mask behind dozens of roses and scented candles.
The candles cast shadows of the women on the wall and are melting, dripping
down their holders.
He glances to meet their eyes. Each lady stares with a bitter gaze, such
as an old antique doll with haunting glass eyes. He is feeling inferior
as he thinks he has disappointed them. He closes his eyes and takes a
deep breath, he swore to himself, he wouldn't let his paranoia get in his
way. On his exhale, he decides to keep his composure and carry on.
He whistles along to the music box as he brings the food from the kitchen.
The wonderful aroma of the food fills this place. He prepared such wonderful
food. Each ingredient measured with precision, it was perfectly planned.
He sets the food on the table, and diligently starts to serve their food.
Being fair, giving each lady the same amount. He pours a succulent frangrant
red wine into their glasses. He really hopes the will enjoy the feast
he has prepared.
He sits in his seat and joins the ladies in his company when he remembers
that he must untie them. They have been tied in their seats for some time
now. He only hopes that just because they are dead, that it won't keep
them from eating. He never meant to kill them...He just wanted someone
for dinner.
Comments on "The Last Supper"
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On Saturday, April 15, 2006, Mahakala
(207) wrote:
ohhhhhhh wicked...
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On Monday, November 8, 2004, Rone4611
(121) wrote:
ohhhh, creepy, unexpected ending.. awesome
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On Sunday, September 26, 2004, toy soldier
(26) wrote:
im in shock...this is awesome!-mike
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On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
...this was so easy to read, vivid desciptions, and the ending is just great.
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On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
sweet...He never ment to kill them, HE just wanted someone for dinner...WOW kya
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A former member wrote:
hehe. i love this. very twisted. loved the very last two lines. awesome ~serpentine~