Forgotten Love of Life..

By Methos

Distant echoes of a nightingales song bring
reflections of the flute she once played
young and inspiring, her flawlessness
was compared to the beauty of cherry blossoms
the tranquility of those nights seems utterly distant now

Within a circle of men, fighting to exhaustion
the not so distant scent of blood swarms his mind
fueling the rage that one often feels near death
sounds of men dying clash with the pounding of hoofs
creating a symphony of its own, a masterpiece of euthanasia

For too long he neglected the heaven she gave to him
often searching for fame or for riches
yet beneath his very nose lay the treasure he sought
not of gold or those of silver, fortune or of gems:
the richness of a woman’s love far greater

A surge of agony envelopes his soul
darkness flows from its wound
leaving him to ponder who will hold her
now that his lifeless body rests
with the obscure dream he strived to obtain…

Far into the distance a melody can be heard
A lone flute plays the song of mourning
while a nightingale watches perched upon a branch
with a flutter of wings the bird proceeds into the air
sending a single blossom to fall, neatly within her lap

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2004 Methos
Published on Thursday, June 24, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "Forgotten Love of Life.."

Log in to post comments.
  • GoldenLotus On Monday, September 12, 2005, GoldenLotus (47)By person wrote:

    "he neglected the heaven she gave to him"...this painted a familar stroke of reality, within my life...i love too read this time and again, whenever i feel i need a quick fix of methos...GP

  • A former member wrote: So beautiful and melancholic... Wonderful... *Lilith*

  • OLd SouL On Tuesday, July 13, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    'sending a single blossom to fall, neatly within her lap' a clashing of dark and light. what an agonizing beautiful piece. Well done, my friend. :::OLd

  • aXe FactoR On Thursday, June 24, 2004, aXe FactoR (333)By person wrote:

    a beautiful piece, amidst the feeling of sadness it gave me. excellent. -MeL-

Contribution Level

Methos's Favorite Poets
Methos's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]

Attention: Darkpoetry is now in maintenance mode and will be shutting down soon. Save your work if you wish to keep it.