frigate farrow
By capt_funguy
i remember twice , catching fucked forgetfulls
about nonchalent strip mine emotionals
cumming twice as hard , as if to make a point , or
impression , or to validate a pet movement
that is a signature reach under and through ...
yeah , to get to the other side to , get to the other
kill me agenda quip ... stop , because i asked you to
it 's just because i can't form a crescent moon ,
given that the tools in my bag ... aren't for that
a time 'spised ghoulish joke ...
a pressure sensitive neck of a dog .... corrected
for being a dreamer ..... squeezed for sniffing
definate scents
kicked across the room , for being there when
style met cloddish coincidence , and failed to
evaporate quickly , discreetly
shirt tucked so fucking neatly
fortold , i'm sure it rang a bell for the clear thinking
telephobes .. they warrant your unbridled attention ,
with tendrils sharpened by sweat , they sleep alone by you ,
but not for slept again commentary ... moreso for
milligrams of whatever you got melting in a spoon
exploration's winding wake trail
in front though - in front
a suction sound precedes your little wish
come through
pilot to co - pilot , , , , silent stare
what could that mean so high on the wave ?
it means there is something so right , going so wrong , that
words belittle , and you should understand me when i
quiet my self out of consideration for my respected colleagues in
the second chamber , listening for anything crucial so
close to the door
bronchials overflowing , resistance was low
all hail trumpet glare and blare
the persevere king is riddled by jesters within a
court of cotton resemblances ... pillowfought terrarium
crinkled wrapper to a guilty gift
kinkily captured like a stowaway on a freudian schooner
making great sail towards honduras with a tide schedule ,
and a map of tipperary being passed around like pretty
little temporary property used rouguishly
hairflowers dried by fever
toke her and pass her ... when funny matters most
when comedy is god
where the now indulgence is a birthright , and
you're just food for the guests who've been eating all day
maybe slippery efforts at peaceful yesterdays
.... listen ....
maybe peaceful efforts at slippery ...
maybe tomorrow will reflect a sun that shone a slick yellow
where mistakes are drowned out by titanium promises ...
skating flippant on slick , slick surfaces revealing cracks on
the ceiling reflected
walk briskly like the impaled and lost tourists
calming down from a wrong turn
i show the dollar to the beggar ...
and i put it away with a smirk
he responds by living dangerously , another day , just to
spite me and the way that i cling to things solid and certain
well fuck us both then .... fuck us both
birthrights and audiences are for the busy being sassy
i wipe the deisel on my pants , 'cause rags are for those
fellows who hide in plain sight ... and pee sitting down
capture my glance and breathe shallow hesitance
misuse my curiosity , and target yourself
bury definate wisdom handle deep with the claw sticking out ..
like the birth of mechanical rabbit ... bloody show
i hold my hand up to the light ... the bright light
i used to see red ... now i see the last defense against the
world falling down ,,,
protected from scarring by a butcher's apron dripping wet
a bastard of unreachable destinations
swept out through the chumslick
stark lumens
by the entrails of the moon
Comments on "frigate farrow"
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A former member wrote:
You almost made me cry. Beyond amazing. Wow. Please post more. I shot it.
The moon.
With a plastic dart.
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A former member wrote:
I am lost inside your words. Reading you, is like taking a snowglobe of reality and shaking it until it breaks.Your train of thought is amazing...even if I'm constantly being derailed :)
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A former member wrote:
this was brilliant..respect
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On Friday, August 6, 2004, Necromancer
(71) wrote:
wow, this started off sounding a little sexual, then with the beggar and the mechcanical rabbit. did it have a meaning with it all. i was left confused and trying to figure it out. - Justin
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A former member wrote:
*claps* I love your style...maybe tomorrow will reflect a sun that shone a slick yellow,where mistakes are drowned out by titanium promises ...beautiful. Thanks for the comments :-)
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A former member wrote:
This work oozes with such strong emotion. I love your work for that reason, it's all so raw and real, but expressed so beautifuly through your words. Excellent work. Thanks for all your encouragment and comments..
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A former member wrote:
first of all.. iwant to say thank you for the comment you left with my writtings... and iwould also like to tell you that your writting isnt half bad its self... i really enjoy reading what you write.. keep up the good work.
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On Monday, July 12, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
I show the dollar to the beggar... Goddamn freakishly awesome!Almost as if you stole my thoughts on that one... stark lumens...Brilliance...i need not say more...
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On Monday, July 12, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
but without the losses...only gains to garner, like a pocketful of gold screaming invest invest invest...Each conglomeration makes a new amount in and of itself...
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On Monday, July 12, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Pilot to co-pilot...I dont know any more, i just dont know where the shit hits the fan and the man becomes man...The word/war in your works is incessant, unceasing attack...Wave after wave, images of russian strategy
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On Wednesday, July 7, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
reading this gets me as high as i am it's an utter treat to read this* i was so glad that their was line after line that only puzzled me more* such talent!
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On Monday, July 5, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
This needs time to digest...Needs time for a comment worthy, legitimate. Something that will reflect the effort we both make as reader and writer...In homage to you as you pay homage to me...
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On Sunday, July 4, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
pointy shoes... and a house resting comfortably on top... capt behind the devices.. and a moon lurking above the crane.. a smirk. and everytime I walk away I leave more dazed than the last. :::OLd
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On Sunday, July 4, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
I read this tons of times and I have nothing to say.. you know it man, your the best at what you do...
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A former member wrote:
'exploration's winding wake trail' Existential& speculative w/ a taste of punk...intoxicatedly accosting like wet smoke.And f*ing terrific.
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On Friday, June 25, 2004, girlafraid
(479) wrote:
i will never have had enough sleep to comment on this...
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On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, Mute Serenade
(389) wrote:
Kirkus Cornelius of daylight wrenching persuasions... i want to quote the entire fucking thing. But the cotton gets me the most.. oh kirk... insanely worth much of a wait... wonderously swell... Sue Zen
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A former member wrote:
This is simply fucking ridiculous...and perfectly fucking awesome. FAV! -END-
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On Monday, June 21, 2004, nell
(270) wrote:
mmmm quite simply delicious, had ot read this over and over again, your use of words creating little schemes that make my tongue trip as i try to read this, it's wicked capt' plain and simple...btw the second to last verse...was superb
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On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
incredible, the whole way through, just a total joy to get lost in the words that just seem to come out of nowhere, nowhere near common roads,
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On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
yet leading to destinations so clear with messages and meanings,i found the middle verses most impressive here .so stylish and uniquely cool