who cares
By sixsixnine
don't worry
don't hurry
never matters what you take
the time is now to make
the unbrocken curse break
just make believe we can see
that we must fucking be free
fucking for eternity
make believe you've never been deceived
don't worry
come hurry
never matters what we do
try harder to break thru
stoned , thrown , blown , & , alone
tripping on this infinite zone
overdosed my soul roams
foams, thoughts i cannot control
it's breaking my fucking skull
& i've never felt so dull
as the pain takes its' toll
I
fucking let go
let it over flow
& like i said before
nothing will ever be slow
it's always dark when i wake up
all fucked & perfect
dead spirits to disect
where's the rain
that would change
this dry soul restraint?
some logical reasons ,
for why i'm feining
for this fucking feeling
pointless & demeaning
only keeps me dreaming
fucking hurry
fucking worry
this shit will get more blury
Comments on "who cares"
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On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
go - fuckin' - go ... dug the 90 mph frantic hellride .... especially the last stanza .. cool man ... funguy
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On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
brilliant, i truly felt this one, wise choice of words, folding upon eachother smoothly...........well done.......urban
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On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, Mute Serenade
(389) wrote:
it was so fast, i mean, it reads fast... it races your heart... and you push for the next line... to not know how safely the arrival at the end will be. Awesome write, hope you're back soon. Sue
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A former member wrote:
NOOOO!!!!!! 669 is gone, COME BAck SOON!
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On Friday, June 18, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Wow... this is awesome. Great job on this. Sorry about your job though.. hang in there. ~Kirsten~
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A former member wrote:
I am sorry about your job, but keep writing things down definately because you have a great way of writing how you feel.
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On Friday, June 18, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
i lost my job so i wont be able to comment much anymore becouse i don't have a computer at home* but i will talk to all of you soon take care* 669 *
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On Sunday, June 20, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
i missed talking to u man..wondered where ur gone...hee hee, now i know. cant wait 2 read more of ya stuff & talk 2 ya again. miss ya! come back soon :) hugs, -MeL-