At the bridge

By Future of Despond

At the bridge
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    No particular           Regard(less)
  History                 I would
   Of control,         Recommend
Gravity               an intermediate
  Requests (insist)              All Haste
      My                       diminishing
Presence                   In my Absence

Regrettfully my submission does not of prose supplant cold equation

                                   and I begin to fall.

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Published on Tuesday, June 15, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "At the bridge"

On Sunday, July 10, 2011, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Brilliant..A nice muse-teaser with a knowing awareness of its format and structure.
On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, Army Barbie (316) wrote:

Hm. This was extremely interesting. I don't think I've read and reread something so much in a long time. I think it's the style it's in cause hot damn I was lost at first. But I think I'm in love with you lol
A former member wrote: awsome poem
On Thursday, March 2, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

Wow I loved this:)
On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, D3ADT0WN (185) wrote:

Wow, This is a cool way you did this. I don't understand it much but it is good from what i see.
On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Serenity (469) wrote:

The style and words are simply amazing.
On Monday, May 2, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555) wrote:

interesting way of doing things. Great write ~*~TarT~*~
A former member wrote: like it for some odd reason..the words just seem to fit, as well as the lil a thingies...thanx
On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, blue (1409) wrote:

You should be extremely proud of yourself for this write...you've raised the bar! ~~FAVS LIST~ sincerely, Brian.
A former member wrote: I am speechless and to say the least, impressed. Unique in it's originality. Very divine. ~*~ Rose ~*~
On Sunday, September 19, 2004, knightmirror (426) wrote:

holy crap!!!!!!!!where have i been...apparently not reading to much...awesome job...****-knight
A former member wrote: wow I like this piece as well, can't wait to read more.
On Thursday, September 9, 2004, Dayer (162) wrote:

this was great :)
On Monday, September 6, 2004, AHHH (184) wrote:

wow, nice
On Saturday, June 19, 2004, aXe FactoR (333) wrote:

a very cool piece, never seen any poem as originally written as this...excellent indeed! keep writing & i'll keep reading... -MeL-
On Thursday, June 17, 2004, Anth (1126) wrote:

great great work, i understood the level of the first part especially, feelings ive often pondered, the structure here adds to its weight, im impressed