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A Perfect Moment
By Midnight Phoenix
Tonight I took the long way home
Even though I grew tired and weary
The moment felt perfect
Passing under the lights
Twisting and turning
There were no stars, but I like it that way
The air gently sprinkled down upon my face
and its windy arms hugged my soul and heart
As if it knew somehow that I was bleeding inside
Memories flooded in like water through a shipwreck
Each in its own melancholic fashion
Yet I felt content in the emotions
So I embraced the mysticism dwelling within me
A lonely, inner peace overcame my thoughts
And left me entranced in its calming song
With the continuing massage of the cool, misty night air
I was left paralyzed in a sweet sorrow
Tonight I took the long way home
Even though I grew tired and weary
The moment felt perfect...
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Copyright 2004 Midnight Phoenix
Published on Thursday, May 20, 2004.
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On Saturday, July 15, 2017, worm
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wrote:
life is, sometimes, good...
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A former member wrote:
great poem ill be thinking of this for a while :)
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Amazingly described ...seems you caught up a perfect moment in words ..nicely done
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, frost bite
(43) wrote:
yah, when i take the long way home it leaves the cops more chances to pull my ass over, congrats to ya.. you fuck
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
Oh, that was refreshing, I can almost feel the mist. Great write..wow DS is right, Poe would be proud. ^_^
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A former member wrote:
Wow, I like this, This has a Poe rythem, Im really loving this,
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