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Burn! Gravity Burn!
By Midnight Phoenix
(My lyrics are almost always just a scratch version, so feel free to give
me ideas!)
Waking up scorched and diseased
This burning heart bleeds fantasy
A dream in life in dormant soul
It pulls so hard you can’t control
And so it feels like falling snow
Underneath your wings so cold
But then you see the world below
And I can’t help but think that it’s worth it, forgive me
Falling down through misty air
Still burning up in atmosphere
Strength in disguise as frozen tears
Those fiery wings won’t fail you here
And so it feels like falling snow
Underneath your wings so cold
But then you see the world below
And I can’t help but think that it’s worth it, forgive me
Perched on top the edge of clouds
So quiet you can barely hear the sounds
Of those who screamed at you to fall
A pleasure to know you lost them all
And so it feels like falling snow
Underneath your wings so cold
But then you see the world below
And I can’t help but think that it’s worth it, forgive me
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Copyright 2004 little nemo
Published on Monday, February 23, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
well i think you just put some minor touches and you have a great song out of it..
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On Monday, March 1, 2004, flying_fox
(573)
wrote:
This is a great song! Would love to hear it with the music...no suggestions to me, I think it's excellent as is. FF
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On Sunday, February 29, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
I like it, wonderful name for it too ;)
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Perfectly captured...it has so much depth and true poetry to it that it makes a hell of a song. Edgy and rock material...just awesome.
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On Tuesday, February 24, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
Beautiful my friend, sadly beautiful.~~~Grave
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On Monday, February 23, 2004, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
Hmmm... i definetly would't want to suggest any idea's on this one chief. For it seems it was perfectly concieved.. [D&A]
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A former member wrote:
I never understand your disclaimers. This is amazingly beautiful. A haunting sound with words put together perfectly. I loved it from the first word...to the last.
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A former member wrote:
I agree, every time you start a write with a disclaimer I know it's going to be gold. ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
The third verse of this is awsome, as was the rest. This has a very triumphant feel to it but also a sense that the battle was won at a heavy cost. ~Ship!
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