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Bitter Sweet
By _Andrew_
Love
A feeling
All we have
All we hold
All we dream to have
Happiness
A feeling
All we searched for
Longed to have
To hold
Forever
Never
To let go
I had
I lost
I found
All of this in you
A comfort
A feeling
Freedom
All of this in you
Tonight
I shed my tears
Crystal clear
For you
My love for you ran dry with my eyes
To cleanse the pain my eyes beheld
All of this
For you
You became my everything
You took
Only to leave
With three words
I Love You
Tonight
I shed my tears
I shed them all for you
For all we could have had
And all we could have been…
As the numbness evades my lips…
Evading my fingertips…
I realize…
I have no regrets
Only you
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Copyright 2004 James Shearer
Published on Wednesday, February 18, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Bitter Sweet"
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A former member wrote:
amazing write, unbielieveable flow. Absolute perfection
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On Monday, January 17, 2005, dropsofhate
(45)
wrote:
i like this a lot.
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
ahh, this is brilliant. awesome write, unbelievable flow and construction. beautiful. Thank you.
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On Sunday, July 18, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I really enjoyed this piece, thanks for sharing.
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On Thursday, July 8, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
wonderful. i can definately feel this. A_C
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
Can't believe I haven't read you in so long, and how much do I miss your old works
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
Love, Crystal
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
This reminds me alot of how you and I used to be James, times do change, and so does your gift for writing, which only gets better
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A former member wrote:
The repetition in this piece and the way you set it up is perfect...phenomenal job.
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On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Jane
(53) wrote:
God, I love your writing. It's so pure and emotional! It gives me chills.
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On Saturday, May 15, 2004, Velvet_Raventon
(447) wrote:
Oh yes...I've read enough of your poems to know you totally deserve to be in my fav list! Velvet.
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A former member wrote:
i agree. the last few words always end up meaning the most. i dig it.
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, Mute Serenade
(445) wrote:
Mercilessly Beautiful. "evades my lips, evading my fingertips." the last portion grasped me. Wonderful. ->Infamous Motherfuckin Sue
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