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The Waiting Room
By Midnight Phoenix
(another experimental piece. how fun!)
Waiting for a vision
Waiting for a voice
Waiting for a decision
Waiting for a choice
Waiting for a thought
Waiting for a hand
Waiting for a shot
Waiting for a plan
Waiting for a meeting
Hope it's coming soon
Waiting for an hour
In the waiting room
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Copyright 2004 little nemo
Published on Tuesday, February 17, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Waiting Room"
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A former member wrote:
Awsum, cartoon character. Nice experiment.
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On Thursday, March 4, 2004, frost bite
(43)
wrote:
hoowwww perdy! so is you really like finding nemo? how fun it was such a great movie! Im glad you liked it so much! the movie finding nemo that is. ya know, the one with the fish in it!! yay for little clown fish! *dork face*
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, myscreamsilenced
(3) wrote:
Wow, I really liked that, it flows so smoothly, even though short it's to the point. Good job.
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
Vary nice, flows great.~~~Grave
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