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suicide justified?
By frost bite
This is a more realistic view of how sombody might read a sucide note...
iutjykmflj WHEN aslgkjasldkjaasl;djflasjkgla;ksj
qwefhjdhfh YOU asdlkfjasldkfjalsk;djflas;dkjf
;uifkfdfla RECIEVE as;dlkfjasldfjal;sdkjf;laskdjf
aoprdfkjsl THIS asldkfjasldfkjasldkfjla;ksdjf
pjer[wewj NOTE asldkfjlasdjflaskdjflkjsdal;fkjlasdk;jf
554dfgerts IT al;sdkfjals;kdjflaskjdfljasldkfj
ajlkksldkd MEANS al;sdkjflkdjflkjelijflskj;lksj
lkjfwoijls I AM kjdflksdjflksdjflksdjflkjsdlk;s
kljfdlksjf DEAD kflwierjfskldjfl;iwje;ofkjsdlkf
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Copyright 2004 frost bite
Published on Wednesday, February 11, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "suicide justified?"
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A former member wrote:
unlike my comment, your piece is so original and true. i like it.
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On Sunday, February 15, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240)
wrote:
Two thumbs up for originality on this one. I knew I'd like it even before I started reading. I think there are many way to interpret this piece, and I have to side with Twilight's perspective on this one.
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On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Makes sense, nice thinking. Tiger
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On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
nice perception.nice write.
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On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
I agree those are the words that actually make sense in a panic when you read a suicide note of someone you know and care about..why and where and everything else doesn't register.
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On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
true, true.. :O) I like it....
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